Second Draft

Draft 2 allowed me to adapt draft 1 to meet the further improvements suggested by my audience feedback from draft 1, I changed certain aspects of my video such as some footage which was low lit to make it more visible and clear to my audience. I then again asked the same server and included questions such as 'do the improvements seem effective?' I therefore am gathering there opinions on whether the changes should stay or be changed again, it allowed me to keep altering my product in a way high enough to meet their demands making my product successful.

My audience suggested that obviously more footage was added to fill the song and that they really liked the parts where the footage shown represented the lyrics sung, they also suggested that I included lip syncing somewhere as they felt this was a convention of most music videos and said that they would be able to recognise the form of the product more if this was added.